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  1. The topic is interesting and a very burning issue. You have a clear structure in you essay. Your list of references is also quite impressive. You could, however, try to have some more dialogue with your references. In many parts you are now mainly just summarizing the sources. Just to mention one example: in section 2 you present different ideas of citizen participation but don’t explicate how you treat these sources. Your own voice is more present when you analyze VoicE. I would have liked to see this kind of critical analysis throughout the whole paper. It could also be good to carry the theories of citizen participation and e-participation to the end of the paper. You present many things you don’t then later use in your analysis.

    In the conclusion section you mention that VoicE isn’t up to date. When you present the project you don’t however mention when the project was conducted.

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